Thursday, February 26, 2009

concentration 3



4 comments:

  1. 1.What suggestions will you use to demonstrate an obvious and purposeful use of the elements and/or principles? If this project were to be turned in to the College Board today it should be very clear what element or principle of art the work focuses on.
    2.How can you create a more engaging design using one or more of the principles of art?
    3.Do you feel that your work demonstrates your idea (concept) while also creating an effective design using the elements and principles of art?
    4.What did you try to do to create informed risk-taking within the parameters of the project? Think about what we have studied thus far in the year (this is where the artist should be moving beyond the basic mastery of concept and presenting the idea in a new way to take a risk).
    5.Think about your personality and your personal vision for your artwork – what did you try to do that represents who you are through the parameters of this project (structure and the self-portrait)?

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  2. this one is probably my second favorite. Cropping it closer to the figure (aka YOU) will help it a lot. The blank space is just kinda sitting there.. being, well, blank.

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  3. i agree with marion about the cropping. if you didnt want to crop though you could extend the dots to the outside and make different patterns. how you developed the form of your body is incredible though..i cant imagine doing that. great job!

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  4. 1.elementents- shape
    principles- rythym balance
    2. i could used proportion more by incorporating more dots around the torso
    3.yes it demonstrates my idea perfectly with concentration
    4. my risk was the accumulation of dots that make up the subject and values in the subject

    5.i continued my design structue and the subject matter

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